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Carolina
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 224
Myrtle Beach, SC

0 posted 2001-08-19 09:49 PM

She looked into his eyes as she heard him say
"I love you"
She had heard those words so many times before, but never with this much meaning
"I love you"
When tears stained her cheeks and harsh words stabbed her heart, he woud be the first to say
"I love you"
After hours of work and nightfall bringing with it even more, he energized her with
"I love you"
When the world turned its back, and no one else seemed to care, he always said
"I love you"
When they said it won't be long, just go on home, he was the only one to say
"I love you"
In her darkest hour with unbearable pain, she looked into his eyes as she heard him say
"I love you"
She whispered back "I love you too, Son"

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

1 posted 2001-08-19 10:55 PM

*chills*...powerful write CAROLINA..didnt expect the ending to be what it was..very powerful..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"i believe we are here for a reason.
as each day unfolds,
we see less of the shadow
and more of the sun" -unknown

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-08-20 05:37 AM

Carolina~
Sure moves a mommy's heart, huh ?
Can't be said OR heard too often~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2001-08-21 09:12 PM

Hi Carolina,

A mothers strength and a sons love, you wrote a powerful piece here, very well done,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

4 posted 2001-08-21 09:58 PM

Powerful write and straight from the heart.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

5 posted 2001-08-21 09:58 PM

Definitely a beautifully moving piece...caught me by surprise at the end, too...great write!

sp

tried to write a letter
to tell you how I feel,
but all I kept on writing
was slipping on the tears from the day...

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