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One Ocean
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One Ocean |
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Carolina Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 224Myrtle Beach, SC 
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You wash over me Like water over sand Constantly changing me always quenching my thirst. I ride your waves as you churn me into myself Releasing your anger Onto my glistening existence. You cut me Mold me into you So we may exist As one ocean |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Welcome to Passions, Carolina...very good images...great work! sp  can I see my world without you in it? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed your first post. Please check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
very well done. . . welcome. . . please take a look around. . .  ------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Welcome to Passions Carolina. This was a beautiful first post with lovely imagery. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
much enjoyed this, CAROLINA very nicely written..will look for more from you  welcome to passions! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wonderful imagery and elemental comparisons of nature and emotion. Welcome to Poetry Land Carolina... so nice to meet you. jm Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Loved the way this all worked together in imagery and emotion. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Welcome to Passions! I love the way you put this together...the imagery is wonderful! Welcome! Cindi |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Never has sand written itself so well. It's difficult to say how much I liked your poem. I like the style, the absolute 'there' feeling to it, the brevity, and the clarity. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Carolina~ Welcome to the beaches of Passions~ You have landed on the shore of friendship~ Spread your poetic blanket and stay awhile~ Sounds like you have many sandcastles to share~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Sorry, forgot to hit library. |
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Carolina Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 224Myrtle Beach, SC |
Thank you everyone! I feel welcomed. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
your name caught my eye so i read your poem. and let me say i am VERY glad i did. hehehe you would like some of my poems about that very south carolina beach you mention great to see you have joined us. e-mail me peace and love jesse When I was a young man I vowed never to marry until I found the ideal woman. Well, I found her - but, alas, she was waiting for the perfect man. :( |
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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
This is a wonderful poem. Welcome to Passions! Kris |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
welcome to Passions, I look forward to more of your work. |
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