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Open Poetry #15

Surf Bar

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-08-19 12:32 PM

Ocean Bar at night,
To wash the salt taste away,
With pitchers of beer.

Up since the first light
Wind pushing canvas all day,
Now times to sleep nears.

Next day returns bright,
Within tide and wind we play,
Outwardly we steer.

Gloom

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-08-19 02:15 PM

sounds enjoyable to me...winds blowing gently...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-08-19 02:16 PM

Wind surfing and surf bars...where were the surf bunnies? James

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-08-19 03:00 PM

And don't you just love the moment you push off to sea? This was excellent PF.

If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed
~* Mysteria *~

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2001-08-19 04:19 PM

wow professor loved the style of this...inspired me...hope you don't mind...helen

darkness now brings retreat
to rid us of our gravel
caressing sand in drink of ale

quickly we abandoned fleet
the sheet we did unravel
lowering the wind’s veil

tomorrow another passage complete
unchartered thoughts to travel
if we catch the perfect gale

Carolina
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 224
Myrtle Beach, SC

5 posted 2001-08-19 09:16 PM

Enjoying yet another post of yours. Seems we have something in common.

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