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kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2001-08-19 10:04 AM

filth-stained personnel
intense scrubbing gone to waste
filth accumulates

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-08-19 10:33 AM

Faterider,
Good morning sunshine. Or perhaps not? Enjoyed

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-08-19 10:57 AM

Nicely done, but hey CHEER UP

Sandra

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-08-19 11:00 AM

Where's the hose? I've got the soap! Well done faterider!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-08-19 11:39 AM

some things need more than a great washing to be clean

I just learned of a new product, "Smells Begone" wow, does it work well, but even so, when it comes to people, water is not the universal solvent, living water is needed

what a thought provoking senryu, sir

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

5 posted 2001-08-19 11:54 AM

Nice senryu, like it very much.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

6 posted 2001-08-19 11:21 PM

..whats up FATERIDER...??

great senryu...but i hope its not a reflecions of kaile...

hope to see the happy write at the end of blue...

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"i believe we are here for a reason.
as each day unfolds,
we see less of the shadow
and more of the sun" -unknown

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

7 posted 2001-08-20 12:14 PM

So how are we going to clean up the filth faterider? I have a little hope, faith and Joy to give will that help? Very nice senryu

Enjoyed
Hugs
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

8 posted 2001-08-20 01:49 AM

It sounds less like low self-esteem, and more like Obsessive Compulsive Disorder. Beautiful though.

"We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912)

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2001-08-20 06:50 AM

thanking for reading this...am feeling pretty lousy these few days but hey, i got a senryu written...which isn't too bad, i suppose

i'll cheer up and write something funky...

i very much liked your comment, secret whisper..feeling compelled to write one about OCD now

[This message has been edited by faterider (edited 08-20-2001).]

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

10 posted 2001-08-20 08:28 AM

dark but very effective!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2001-08-21 09:05 AM

first start with the mind
cleansing there purifies all
then dirt rinses off

http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/interloper.htm

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