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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-08-11 07:23 PM

     There comes a time, I must move on
     to get passed the heartache and pain,
     I must forget all of these tears
     that I cried like the pouring rain.

     There comes a time, I need accept
     that my trust in you was so wrong,
     that I had no place in your heart
     it was somewhere I didn't belong.

     There comes a time, to go forward
     I can not linger in the past,
     and I will pray that the next time
     I will not fall in quite so fast.

     When life holds it's message so sublime
     my soul will soar, there comes a time.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

1 posted 2001-08-11 07:27 PM

I hope the time is now. Perhaps "they" didn't deserve your generous heart. Enjoyed

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-08-11 07:29 PM

There is always a time fro the healing to begin and at last take hold. Your time is here. May you soar always.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-08-12 06:38 PM

and it is a smart person who knows the time is NOW!

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2001-08-12 07:49 PM

wow....i liked this one aunt donna, sad though it was.....i still liked it.

death is certain, life is not
have u ever needed somebody so bad, u cry when u arent around them, and still miss them when u r around them?

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-08-12 08:27 PM

GentleSpirit~
I like the easy flow of this~
Nicely portrayed~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2001-08-12 10:03 PM

There definitely "comes a time", my friend - ride like the wind.

jwesley

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

7 posted 2001-08-13 05:26 AM

There will come a time.. if we keep a door open. It is said that:
     To love is to risk not being loved in return.
     To live is to risk dying.
     To hope is to risk dispair.
     To try is to risk failure.
  But to risk we must.. for the greatest
  hazard in life is to risk nothing.

Perhaps... another time. :-)

shadow of the fall
Member

since 2001-08-13

Posts 83
Indiana

8 posted 2001-08-13 07:06 AM

yes, and in that time we look back and in looking back we must believe that we were loved and we remember.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2001-08-13 07:28 AM

wanted to say I read this one twice. there always comes a time. beautiful

illusion
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 296

10 posted 2001-08-13 10:01 AM

Sometimes that time doesn't come as quickly as it should.

This is sadly beautiful.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2001-08-13 06:00 PM

I was surprised to see all of your replies to this. I am glad that you all found something in this that you could understand.
I appreciate the kindness...

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2001-08-13 07:18 PM

that time is now my friend. . . with the lessons learned. . . and a life to live. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2001-08-14 09:55 PM

enjoy

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2001-08-15 04:32 PM

So true...why hold onto something that isn't there...if it is it will let you know...James

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

15 posted 2001-08-15 04:46 PM

A lot of truth to your gentle words
Enjoyed reading this
Liz

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

16 posted 2001-08-15 06:48 PM

I really like the way the alternating rhyme (2/4) lends a smooth feel to the reading of this piece. Very well written and of course the time IS now. Great write.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

17 posted 2001-08-21 09:14 AM

And again, I am amazed at the replies to this, and thankful for your support and friendship in words. Hugs to all.
Donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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