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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2001-08-19 02:26 AM



The shining silvery moon, caressing me,
My inhibitions and awareness are gone,
I spring forth to a new reality,
Where my soul can sing my song.

Without this body of biological discrepancies,
This ultimate shroud from the awareness of the eternal,
I see the pounding light, caressing and rejuvinating,
A rejuvination so powerful it is beyond anthing I could have ever felt,
Bathing in the soothing rays of Elysium,
I am finally heard, and understood, and loved by everyone for the first time,
They care for me deeply, I must care for them back,
To love them with all my mind, body, and soul.
They are one with me, their mesmerizingly soothing lights shine with mine.
And I finally feel peace....
But alas!.....
Another day arrives, and I must start over again.....
Toiling and working and living my life....
There is a comfort I feel in the back of my head,
That I will be free again...

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© Copyright 2001 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-08-19 05:31 PM


Life can seem a combination of curse and blessing. Very well expressed!
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
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2 posted 2001-08-20 10:03 PM


Hi EagleScorpion,

Wonderful work here and yes those few times we find total reprieve is awesome and something we can hold on to until the time we get the chance to visit again,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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