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blissfully i need... senyru
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blissfully i need... senyru |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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this is sort of a repost from the pub..it was not posted on its own tho..posted as a reply in one of my other poems..  dgv================================================== claws of velvet hand piercing flesh through passion's sweat echo hearts afire blissfully i need desires flow like cool water quench my living thirst ravish melding souls ecstasy's rolling thunder wrinkle heaven's bed -dgvarner 2000 ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
loved this & really loved this line...helen "wrinkle heaven's bed" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's so enjoyable to see what inspires us...this is wonderful, and I am so glad you took the time to go back and bring it out for the rest of us to read... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thunder does indeed wrinkle heaven's bed.. I like it...  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
interesting word combinations and images...i liked "claws of velvet hand" |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
HELEN, SUNSHINE, NAN, KAILE..thanks so much for stopping to read me havent been writing much these days..and dont get much time to spend reading either unfortunately  but tricks (vlraynes) was about to threaten me with bodily harm if i didnt post SOMETHING! lol  thanks again! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ "i believe we are here for a reason. as each day unfolds, we see less of the shadow and more of the sun" -unknown [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-19-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- I'm LOVING these...very cool! So good to see your name back in the forums, my long lost pal. These are wonderful! So...whatcha gonna post next? LOL!  Love ya,  ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
TRICKS..i have filled your need, i have met succeed..i have need to post not another...lol NO! just kidding....  maybe i can dig one up for ya later..but if its a new one..you can almost bet it'll just be silliness..thats about all i get time for these days@#! thanks for having the need to read! lol hugs, g [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-21-2001).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
well, I love the lines in these.... and the wrinkle heaven's bed .... does it for me. Parker |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
such great images in this one dgvarner, well done!! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER..this one was actually written in a bit of a poetry "top me" battle with you..if you recall..lol its been a while.. but i rather like that line myself...care to do a little wrinkling??  VAS..thanks a bunch! good to have you stop in hugs, g |
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