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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Dance Me ~*Marge Tindal*~  Hold my body close in dance feel the frenzied heat Rhythmically romancing soul of music stirs the beat Twirling and swirling dizzied with delight Dance me past the bandstand to the balcony of the night Surrender to the symphony playing this heartbeat of mine Dance me into tomorrow's dawning entwined in en`core divine ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
marge...you ARE the poet's poet!!! "Surrender to the symphony playing this heartbeat of mine" loved these lines...helen |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sweatin' here Marge...feeling the HEAT... you're the best... jwesley |
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Snooganzmeister32 Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 67Cali, USA |
I love the way you capture the heat of dancing in this poem. Its written beautifly dear.. *huggles* |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Marge I love this kinda dance the one where as you say 'surrender to the symphony' this makes me smileNsigh2nite... Thank you sweetPoetFriend for this splendid read... Hugs2uAlways *~coco~* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I could have danced all night...and this would have only helped me along! Thank you Marge...we could all use a little extra beat now and then! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- I can feel the heat in this one! Just wonderful... I love it!  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Just beautiful, and the dance goes on!! Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ Awww ! What a nice thing to say. Thank you~ JWesley~ I recommend another round~ Perhaps a slow cool-down waltz~  Rikki~ Thank you so much. CoCoBaci~ *Hugs* from this corner of the dance floor, sweet lady~ Karilea~ I definitely had a 'dancing' night~ Now I'm the one who's 'beat' ! Vicky~ A little heat is a good thing, huh ? A regular swarm-of-warm in the forums for sure~  Shadows~ Ahhhh ... 'shadows dancing' That's a good thing~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Marge, Beautiful write! Cindi |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Tango with me, my little Marge And we won't skip a beat. Give me just a little chance To sweep you off your feet. Rhumba with me, you sexy gal I'll take you on the floor, Amaze you with such movements that You'll beg and scream for more!! Waltz with me, sweet poetess And when our bodies press Against each other, you'll be sorry That you wore a dress!! Dance with me until tomorrow And, when you go to work, When they ask you how dancing went, Just say, "I did the jerk!"  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cindi~ Glad you found it so. Thanks for stepping onto the dance floor~ BallAstairDeer~ If ever I should chance To be engaged within a dance Locked tightly in the arms of you I guarantee ... with 'work', I'm through I would give you reason To remember just how neat A Rhumba- Humba can be, deer man When I'm undressed in de-feet ! *You are sooooooooo B A D ... and that makes you sooooooooo G O O D !  You are just the Fred Astaire of verse~ Love ya', doll~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Do we have to know the steps or are we allowed to impovise? Nice to see you twirling across the floor of temptation but hey.............oh never mind....you wouldn't believe me anyway. LOL So I am a sucker for a good tune put to the floor especially when there are two things that always press the matter home for me. NO!!!!!!!!!!!!! I ain't tellin!!! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely! Corinne |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
This made me want to dance...well I am in vegas for the week maybe I will track down a dance club!!! Good post!!! Julie :) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Marge, are you "In the mood?" Or, can you be reached at "Pennsylvania 6-5000." Or, would you like a "Moonlight Serenade?" Ok then, maybe just a waltz. Truly, you are outdoing yourself this day! I am enraptured with your work. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Hi baby ... you tickle me~ Corinne~ Thanks, hon. JulieAnn~ Thank you very much. InterLoper~ Always Possibly Could be For sure You charm me with your replies~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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