Open Poetry #15 |
Flame To The Candle |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Flame To The Candle ~*Marge Tindal*~ I chose a candle of soft adorn upon the shelf, placed it just so Never thought to light it to see it's lovely glow There it sat for many a year dusted and admired Never gave off any warmth for it never was touched with the fire Then came the night that I had need to feel the flicker of wick I struck the match of remember and touched the candle quick The flame grabbed hold and sputtered until it felt the waxing melt and all the dreams of yesterday into the wick was felt The glow that lit the evening burned with sweet remember Of a time when your fire burned brightly quietly then to ember The dance of flame across my heart was steady with the light And how the warmth sustained me through the lonely night Softest glow of heart's recall melted until dawn Though the candle was no more the memories lingered on I would suppose the lesson contained within this rhyme is to be the flame to someone's candle before the pass of time~ That they may share in knowing of the very special glowing that within a heart is felt before the candle melts~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I would suppose the lesson contained within this rhyme is to be the flame to someone's candle before the pass of time~ That they may share in knowing of the very special glowing that within a heart is felt before the candle melts~ ============================= You are so cool...and this is SOOOOO beautiful in both its inspire and intend... and never doubt dear one...you have been "the flame" many a time...your poetry glows me Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is beautiful Marge. I do enjoy reading all of your writings. They always mean so much. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
My stars, Marge, you have done it to me once again, making me feel like a schoolboy shuffling his toe in the dirt in the presence of the learned one...wonderful write, my very dear friend...very gentle smile |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Darn, lady....this should melt everyone's heart... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
good message...and a nicely written poem.. I enjoyed! |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Totally enjoyed the warmth of this piece. Every word a vivid image. Standing applauding, with a big smile on my face. Bravo!!!!!! Love and peace Maggie ((~.~)) |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I enjoyed this very much. ...I struck the match of remember... Thanks. Melton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, My candle melted long ago But the thoughts remain aglow. Hugs and kisses Sy PS. Excellent poem |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Your love flows through your poems. I enjoy very much. Thanks, Gail |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Hugs ... Nah ... I'm the 'wittle wick'~ Elosise~ How my heart smiles at seeing you, my friend ! You've been missed ! ! ! Logan~ You tickle me ! And it feels good ~ DecaFlame~ With your name ... you're just what the candle needed~ FlutterWings~ Thank you so much for the enthusiastic response. Melton~ You have a knack for finding my favorite line~ Thank you. VanDana~ Thanks, hon. Seymour~ The very thought of puddles of you ... melts my heart~ Gail~ Thanks, gal~ ~*Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, a beautiful way to learn something, the flicker of a candle and your words. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Your poem... your thoughts... a lovely bright candle in the midst of darkness. Thank you for the vision and the inspiration... may I someday be an example of it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Marge this reminds me of the two candles that Michelle bought for me and her to burn together...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dee~ Always my pleasure to know I've shared with you~ MoonShadow~ To light an idea that glows in someone's vision is a nice thing to know you've done. Thank you~ JamesMichael~ I'm pleased to have stirred a memory for you, my friend~ ~*Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Gee how did I miss this one, the neighbours around me see candles on in here, and they have the phone ready to call 911! Oh the flame of remembrance, Marge you kindled my spirit with this one, for I know this one well! Nicely done gal. If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Wow...I certainly HAVE gotten behind haven't I! You already know I love this. "I would suppose the lesson contained within this rhyme is to be the flame to someone's candle before the pass of time~" And, what an important lesson it is. Yet another piece of your lovely heart. Love ya, , ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-19-2001).] |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautifully written with a great message, loved it Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ LOL @ 911 ! ! *Hugs* on 'flame of remembrance'~ Vicky~ Me little buddy ... How I thank YOU for the 'candle' of friendship that is soooooooooooo you~ You burn brightly in my heart~ Shadow~ Thank you so much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Marge This was so very lovely. I have many candles around my home and I light them often as they give such a feeling of serenity, just as your poem did for me this morning. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Thank you so much. It's nice to share a bit of serenity with a friend. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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