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Your Garden
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Your Garden |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Your garden of pleasures so wild and so free beckons to me to be tended... With tender attention and sweet nurturing loves harvest is real not pretended. Soft nights,homegrown delights arouse tongues desire scents taunt,then evoke passions cue... With need for subsistence I can find no resistence and no end to my desire for you. From seedling till bloom we'll partake of it all, your garden of pleasures we'll share... I could eat from your table each day of my life and never grow tired of the fare. Live like it's your last day... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Delicious! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderfully done. . . such a beautiful flow and picture you've shown. . . great job. . .  ------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
Great write. I really enjoyed this! Kris |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Beautifully done! Cindi |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Thanks all of you...I appreciate you taking the time to read and reply...  Live like it's your last day... Dance like nobody's watching... Love like you've never been hurt... [This message has been edited by bbent (edited 08-20-2001).] |
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