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Open Poetry #15

Tempest

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

0 posted 2001-08-18 09:13 PM

Tempest

Woe
To the claustrophobic mind
That shuts all out
But what it finds in kind

Billowing and peaceful clouds
Hold a tempest within

Paranoiac fear to hide
Look at all you have locked outside

I say
There are no honest smiles
Without first tears
Comfort yourself
For all of the lost years

Make haste
You lonesome love
Your past
Is the unknown
Your path
Is your own

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

shadow of the fall
Member

since 2001-08-13

Posts 83
Indiana

1 posted 2001-08-18 10:44 PM

enjoyed this quite a bit!

Karen

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2001-08-19 12:05 PM

wow wow ohhhhh WOW...powerful write here !!!

"I say
There are no honest smiles
Without first tears
Comfort yourself
For all of the lost years

Make haste
You lonesome love
Your past
Is the unknown
Your path
Is your own"

really loved this part...helen

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-08-20 04:40 PM

Yes, "your path is your own."
Well writ indeed.

http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/interloper.htm

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