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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2001-07-14 05:03 PM

luna...
lady moonglow
smiling across night sky
showering me with soft moonbeam
your watchful eye comforting through the night
staying with me till the morning
fading to rising sun
until tonight...
luna

~vlraynes

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-14-2001).]

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-07-14 05:12 PM

Hey Vicky - this was absolutely beautiful but girl I would not know a ricameter from a centameter if you gave me one, but I loved the content and how this made me feel. This was lovely...and I bet that I know someone else who is going to love this one!

~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 07-14-2001).]

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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2 posted 2001-07-14 06:37 PM

lovely imagery in this Vicky...and its written feather light.
I havent tried this format but I know we have several experts in here who will be able to let ya know ...Sea for one.

and yes...a certain Luna poetess will love this one.

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-07-14 09:06 PM

Oh, Vicky~
It IS a tricky ricky from Vicky !

You did this to PERFECTION !
And .... of course this LunaLadyLovesIt !
Just look at you glowing and g r o w i n g !

You maka me berry Happy !
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Flutterwings
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since 2001-07-10

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Maine

4 posted 2001-07-14 09:17 PM

AHhhhh! This glows like a happy luna should.
I loved the brightness of this read. A talented illumination.

I much enjoyed.
Love and peace ((~.~))

vlraynes
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5 posted 2001-07-14 09:18 PM

Sharon-
   LOL @ you...   You're too cute!
   Really glad you enjoyed this one, my friend..


Janet Marie-
   Thanks so much...you've made me smile
   big with your sweet reply..
   Glad you like it..

Marge...my lunar inspiration-
   You just made my night with your reply!
   The fact that YOU love this is the
   bestest compliment of them all..
   Thank you sweet LunaLady..

   hugs to you all,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

vlraynes
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6 posted 2001-07-14 09:19 PM

Flutterwings-
   You just fluttered in while I wasn't
   lookin'...LOL.
   Thanks for taking a peek...I'm so
   happy you enjoyed this..
   Welcome, again, to Passions!

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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7 posted 2001-07-14 09:53 PM

Bravo, Vicky! Gotta admire a poet who picks difficult structures and makes them work.

yep, it fits Margie, for sure. They named a lunar condition after her...now, what was it?....oh yes - lunatic!

UH-OH! I'm in for it now!

Marge Tindal

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Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-07-14 10:14 PM

You KNOW I couldn't let him slide
with a comment that could tan his hide
I thought of a rhyme to Lunatic him
But into Adult I'd have to stick 'em !

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2001-07-14 10:33 PM

what would we do without the moon Vicky
Very lovely indeed..

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

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Oregon

10 posted 2001-07-15 02:04 AM

well done, and RUN, too

dgvarner
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Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

11 posted 2001-07-18 12:43 PM

oh...youre just too much tricks.....

this is a great one..you do good poetry

hugs, g

"sometimes when youre hurrying too much to see whats for tomorrow, you miss whats for today.." -demi moore

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

12 posted 2001-07-18 01:02 PM

This is an excellent example of rictameter, Vicky...and not only that...

but a wonderful expression of tribute for another poet...

vlraynes
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13 posted 2001-07-20 11:23 AM

balladeer-
   Thank you so much, kind sir...that's
   quite a compliment coming from you..

   Yes sir!  You certainly are playing with
   fire, messin' with Margie like that..LOL.
   ...and I see she quickly returned to
   put you in your place too... LOL

Marge-
   ROFL..You tell him!!
   I LOVE IT!!

Victoria-
   Thanks much...glad you enjoyed..

VAS-
   Thank you..

dg-
   LOL...I 'do good poetry', huh?
   Thanks much, old friend..
   You 'do' pretty darn good poetry yourself!
   Glad you like this one!

Lady In White-
   Thanks so much for the compliment..
   Yes..we are definitely blessed to have
   our own 'Lady Luna' right here in the blues.
   Glad you enjoyed.

   hugs to all,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

14 posted 2001-07-20 07:30 PM

This is perfect. Not only did you get the poet pictured prefect....you did the style perfect....great read

BloomingRose
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15 posted 2001-07-20 08:35 PM

Perfection at it's best!
Love it.

Deb

vlraynes
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16 posted 2001-07-23 02:00 PM

Alan-
   Thank you so much for such a kind reply!
   You've made my day..

Deb-
   I'm so glad you enjoyed this one!
   Your opinion means alot..
   Thanks much..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

17 posted 2001-07-23 03:36 PM

I love this way of describing the moon...luna how wonderful
Hugs
Cindi

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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Ontario, CANADA

18 posted 2001-07-23 09:11 PM

Vicky, I love this, you bring the moon to life so beautifully

Melissa~

Mike
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19 posted 2001-07-24 12:28 PM

very nice, wonderfully written.

vlraynes
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20 posted 2001-07-24 12:42 PM

cindi-
   Thank you, my dear..glad you enjoyed..

Melissa-
   Thanks so much, my friend..
   So glad you enjoyed this..

Mike-
   That you enjoyed this means alot to me,
   as I've read some of your lovely poetry..
   Thank you so much..

   hugs to all,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Charisma

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21 posted 2001-07-24 01:03 AM

ohhh this is sooooo beautiful....love this presentation.

Charisma

vlraynes
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22 posted 2001-07-24 01:35 AM

Charisma-
   Thank you so much, my friend..
   Your replies always make me smile..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

lunatic
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since 2001-04-20

Posts 172

23 posted 2001-07-25 12:05 PM

What is this? Who said it was a lady? How did you find out about my female helper?
Beautiful write and questionable expose

Let thy moon arise. William Blake

vlraynes
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24 posted 2001-07-26 11:08 PM

lunatic-
   LOL...yep...the cat is out of the bag.
   Thanks much..glad you enjoyed this..

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

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where the sky and horizon meet

25 posted 2001-09-13 10:24 PM

VickyChicky~ How could I have missed this? This is awesome! I did a search for rictameters because I wanted to try one and I found this beauty

I'm so glad I looked!

Hugs to you,
~SmittenKitten

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

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26 posted 2001-10-13 01:22 PM

enjoyed the lightheartedness of this thread and the way everyone interacts with so much warmth.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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