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Attempt at Sonnet |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"MoonShadow's Sonnet" I pray the moon will greet me in the night, and pass its lovely shadow down below, to cloak me with a mantle of star light and warm me with its pale and waning glow. I seek the soothing shadow of the moon, so drawn to awesome beauty in a trance. I hear a haunting melody and tune. My soul weaves to a fro, like in a dance. We blend togehter well, the Moon and I, till we are almost one in love's embrace. A mutual attraction, Earth and Sky, together, arm in arm and face to face. My soul will be content like nights before, enfolded by MoonShadow ever more. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I pray the moon will greet me in the night, and pass its lovely shadow down below, to cloak me with a mantle of star light and warm me with its pale and waning glow. =========================== We blend togehter well, the Moon and I, till we are almost one in love's embrace. A mutual attraction, Earth and Sky, together, arm in arm and face to face. ================================ this is stunning ... the imagery in this is enchanting... your poetic phrasing and use of ethereal comparisons to define the emotions creates a lovely romantic intend... the cadence made this a delight to read aloud. very well done poet sir jm Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Sonnets are so difficult to write. And writing them well twice so. Very good. |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
it's VERY enchanting!!!! Karen |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Much applause, MoonShadow... jwesley |
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Sweeetsuz Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 770Fresno CA. |
Ahhh and and a love sonnet too.... well done and not at all easy to do. Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is beautiful and you obviously have a flair for sonnets! Betty Lou Hebert |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Classic.It is refreshing to read poetry in a formal style. paladin |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautifully done..enjoyed....  ~Victoria~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MoonShadow~ 'We blend togehter well, the Moon and I, till we are almost one in love's embrace. A mutual attraction, Earth and Sky, together, arm in arm and face to face.' Very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely, I think you should change the title and print this out, as Sonnet for the Moon.. I feel just this way about the moon, you have captured it perfectly, and with great style. Sandra |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beautiful sonnet. Great job! Deb |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Very nice! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely beautiful! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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