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Open Poetry #15

Tarp

Samia
Junior Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 47
Earth of corse!

0 posted 2001-08-17 08:36 PM

Tarp

Wait a few minutes,
outside.
Between two buildings
on the brick ledge- there.
Look at the tree,
it’s base is wrapped in a tarp,
the sky is getting dark
like its going to rain.
Or come in now.
It wouldn’t really matter,
either way,
if you wait a few minutes
or come in now.
It’s going to rain.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-08-18 11:16 AM

ah yes. . .the rain comes. . .no matter. . .

I liked this. . . it kind of reminded me of Ferlinghetti. . . great job. . .

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Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2001-08-19 11:37 PM

Hi Samia,

Can't stop the rain, I enjoyed this very much and welcome to Passions hope your enjoying your stay.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-08-20 08:57 AM

interesting style and a poem one could take in several ways... I enjoyed the think...

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-08-20 08:59 AM

Like the style and the read was most enjoyable!

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