Open Poetry #15 |
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No Doubt |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England ![]() |
![]() Sometimes I don’t write the words I know you’d like to hear… And sometimes I don’t know what I should say… I try to say what’s in my heart, and make it all seem clear… But sometimes love and need get in the way… Circumstance has placed me in a room without a door… I close my eyes, and then I call your name… A hole appears, the sun shines through, where there was none before… And melts away my sadness and my pain… There is no doubt, in my mind… Of the love I know I’ll find… And I’m sorry if it ever seemed that way… and when all our trials are through… It will be just me and you… For we were meant to be in love to stay… For you, I’d fly o’er mountains tall, and over oceans wide… My heart already waits there at your door… And someday I know I will stand in love, right by your side… That’s all I ask of life, and nothing more… So, please forgive my clumsy words, and know that they are true… Words are all I have to use right now… But someday, I will show my love… I’ll give it all to you… And make up for this emptiness somehow… There is no doubt, in my mind…. Of the life I know we’ll find… When up ahead the road is straight and clear… And when the memories are all gone, and we write a brand new song… Our angels will be singing, what we always knew we’d hear… The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Keep the faith. Almost songlike. |
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Snooganzmeister32 Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 67Cali, USA |
That is one of the best love poems I've read in a while. *hugglez* I loved it! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunnyOne~ You give us a lovely melody in your verse~ 'For you, I’d fly o’er mountains tall, and over oceans wide… My heart already waits there at your door… And someday I know I will stand in love, right by your side… That’s all I ask of life, and nothing more…' Beautiful thoughts~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice writing, Sunny, from the heart, as we can see. Sandra |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful heart-filled sentiments Sunny ... your devotion and love shine genuinely through these inspiring lines. Very nicely penned! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny You certainly have beautiful words and a beautiful, tender heart. Keep smiling - your day will come. |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
This sounds like an historical romance !!!! Karen |
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