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Open Poetry #15

Descendant of Greek Gods

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-08-17 05:32 PM

Prometheus
Stole fire from Zeus
Bestowing mankind
With heat and light
For the darkness

You stole mine
When you walked

Prometheus was noble
But suffered the god’s wrath
You made the sufferance mine

I sometimes think
The Greek God’s
Were indeed related to you

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-08-17 05:44 PM

This is good! Very good! Thank you!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-08-17 06:43 PM

They probably were...James

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-08-17 06:53 PM

Cpat Hair,
Good write, enjoyed the read.

poetsguild
Member

since 2001-08-12

Posts 85
Florida

4 posted 2001-08-17 09:53 PM

Like the allusion here
and how you wrap it around
desire.

Good one.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2001-08-18 07:12 AM

Well, I know someone else descended from the Gods, maybe the kinder ones..

I like the way you did this. I have had that thought too, and I am half Greek..
What makes someone hurt us so much, and be so #*casual about it, thats the part that really gets to me
Sandra

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