Open Poetry #15 |
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Continuum |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
coming to termination of time and place ways of space taking toll grabbing hold then letting go I remain more than feather light, a weight of consciousness, streaming.... small grooves of happenings having creased a runneling through time, ever widening, taking in more expanding barriers, moving ever faster, rushing along dams will never hold back all that the consciousness allows, and only a final termination of time and place ways of space taking toll grabbing hold then letting go will release me |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Oh!! this is so superb, it flows soooooooooo beautifully. YOU are growing and it's wonderful to see dearest sister, absolutely wonderful. I'll be back I promise, but right now you know that typing really takes it out of me. take care of you let your flame burn on brighter and higher Love and warm stuff Puck ![]() ![]() ![]() Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 08-17-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice!!! flows well and says much... I enjoyed!! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Gaining speed in untamed need to be freed. Enjoyed (indeed) |
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poetsguild Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 85Florida |
Most elegant, Decaflame consciousness - the breakfast of champions liked the use of the word "runneling" |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
And so one, and so on... I like the continuity of this, Deca.. ![]() |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Ms Mushy, it's easy to grow when one is given so much room to stretch...thank you... Captain, your comments are always vastly appreciated...thank you... RSW, I do enjoy your poetic comments, thank you... poetsguild, thank you for taking time to read this... Nan...you are a bottle of inspiration that I sprinkle liberally...thank you! |
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