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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2001-08-17 02:10 PM

The Rose of my Eye

~~~
Strolling through gardens
of
roses so rare
thoughts drifting ... sweet essence
enchanting the air
The colors ... the hues
all pleasing to eye
each petal ... a picture
make breathing a sigh
The trickle of water
to pool crystal clear
the frolic of birds
with nothing to fear
A moss covered bridge o'er meandering brook
'neath flowering tree
finds you ... lost in a book
My silent approach brings sparkle to eyes
your lips ... gently curl
with pleasant surprise
~
There in my hand
knelt down at your side
a ring ...
made with diamond
for
'the Rose of my Eye'
~~~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-08-17 02:14 PM

After yesterday's "surprise" I wasn't sure what I would find....

so I was pleased, very pleased, with this ending....

Well done, Sir!

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2001-08-17 03:15 PM

very romantic indeed...enjoyed Rex..

~Victoria~

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-08-18 10:48 AM

Oh Rex ... this is absolutely wonderful. You have such a perfect rhythm and flow throughout this romantically descriptive piece, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-08-18 05:22 PM

well done Rex. . . sure to melt hearts everywhere. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

5 posted 2001-08-18 07:03 PM

Very soft and romantic, lovely!

Cor

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

6 posted 2001-08-18 07:14 PM

Very nicely done, enjoyed.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

7 posted 2001-08-18 07:46 PM

Wonderful approach. Romancing the rose! Enjoyed!
Sincerely,
Regina

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

8 posted 2001-08-18 09:18 PM

Enjoyed this one. The flow is excellent. Very romantic.

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

9 posted 2001-08-19 08:51 AM

Now Sunshine ... would I fool you twice?

Thankyou Victoria ... that's very kind of you

Thanks Kit ... you're always so kind

Sven ... I know of one that it melted for sure, thankyou

Corinne ... you're very kind thankyou

shadow974 ... glad you enjoyed it, thanks

thankyou Regina ... I enjoy writing this theme most of all

Eloise ... thankyou for the nice relpy

[This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 08-19-2001).]

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