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moongoddess
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0 posted 2001-08-17 08:11 AM



Your touch is sweetly horrifying
his words...remain
his music...remains
every thought of him remains
you make me see the remains of him
that pushed up in me so hard,
so fast to realize
he took me somewhere
i never wanted to go

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tracie66
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1 posted 2001-08-17 08:14 AM


anguished thoughts it seems...well penned piece
~HUGS~
Tracie

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It is the harmony of the universe



Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2001-08-17 08:54 AM


well penned..and filled with anguish...


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3 posted 2001-08-17 01:07 PM


it's those remnants that make us wonder if we can move on. . .

well done. . .

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