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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2001-07-14 02:39 PM





Making Love

Walk with me gently.
Softly take my hand.
With love, speak to me.
I will understand.

Talk with me calmly.
Sweetly make me smile.
With joy, charm my soul.
I'm yours all the while.

Fly with me closely.
Mildly quake my kiss.
With peace, lie with me.
I will glow with bliss.

Dream with me solely.
Warmly wake my day.
With life, found in me.
I'm yours all the way.

-Lighthouse Bob


© Copyright 2001 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-07-14 03:23 PM


Why Bob...this is very lovely, softly sincere, and gently persuasive...

well done Sir...
Martie
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2 posted 2001-07-14 03:44 PM

Bob--What a tender, poetic request..I hope that she said yes.
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-07-14 08:37 PM

Well Bob you sly little thing you, this really woke me up!  WOW
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4 posted 2001-08-06 11:52 AM

this surely deserves another round of replies...liked the last two lines especially, Bob
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5 posted 2001-08-06 11:57 AM

Very soft piece.  Enjoyed the read.

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