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Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

0 posted 2001-08-16 07:58 PM

This was written for Janet Marie, just as was whispered to me. I take no credit for these words.
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Moonlit rhyme strokes your face,
as I hold you, in loves embrace.
Tears that sparkle, in glows light,
I wipe with the breeze to make it right.
What rustles the leaves in towering trees,
is only the presence I send to thee.

You are not alone in the night
for your very soul I hold so tight.
How can you feel I left you cold,
when all around is what I told.
Is there nothing I set in rhyme,
that you can’t see in your loving mind.

Butterfly swarm here and there,
none of them would ever scare.
Purples and yellows so daintily fly,
as the stately Monarch take to the sky.
fly with them, little butterfly,
soar beyond your telling cry

I’ll always be with you, my gentle one,
even to the day the last race is won.
But for now, you have life to fight,
our love we shared will make it right.
Burst out with words that we did best,
there will be time enough for eternal rest

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-08-16 08:27 PM

You, Sir, hear whispers very, very well, indeed...

JanetMarie will cherish this...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2001-08-16 08:31 PM

I can see that you are touching many, and I am delighted to see it. Beautiful and tender poetry as usual, Sweet One.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-08-16 08:49 PM

What a gentle man you are. You have tenderly touched my heart this evening.

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

4 posted 2001-08-16 08:53 PM

lovely Logan...simply lovely. A beautiful poem for a beautiful lady!
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-08-16 09:43 PM

Moonlit rhyme strokes your face,
as I hold you, in loves embrace.
Tears that sparkle, in glows light,
I wipe with the breeze to make it right.
What rustles the leaves in towering trees,
is only the presence I send to thee.

You are not alone in the night
for your very soul I hold so tight.
How can you feel I left you cold,
when all around is what I told.
Is there nothing I set in rhyme,
that you can’t see in your loving mind.
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Logan this touches me in places deep...
and thank you wont cover it...
for you to be given this beautiful inspire from my poem tells me you too see my sweet Vante's light..and that once again promises are kept...
thank you very much sweet keeper...we live in the light.
you are a special person

jm

Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me thy light

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2001-08-16 10:39 PM

Logan
What a beautifully heartfelt piece this was that came from such a kind, loving heart.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-08-16 11:16 PM

Logan~

Whispered on the spirit wind
beauty to a heart did wend~
Waft of butterfly in dance
did not find your heart by chance~
For it is written in *gentle smile*
resting in the heart for a long, long while~

Lovely gifting, sweet keeper~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-08-16 11:20 PM

This is so beautiful. Even though you don't take credit, I think you must take at least a little.
Wonderful.
Sandra

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-08-16 11:56 PM

My friend, you muse soars above the eagles. Wonderful verse.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2001-08-17 12:54 PM

Vante's words whispered on wings of blue,
"gentle smile", then penned by you.
Keeper kind, living in the light,
Bless you for the keep of JM this night.

If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed
~* Mysteria *~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

11 posted 2001-08-17 02:12 AM

Absolutely incredible, Logan. You are quite a wonder. Hugs to you, with my gratitude, for the comfort of our friend.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2001-08-21 12:04 PM

Logan--you are an opening for the spirit, my friend, and the love sent through you just makes me smile. Thank you for letting it happen.

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

13 posted 2001-08-21 01:34 AM

Logan, this is sooooooooooo exquisite I can't find any other words...

Beautiful expression you have penned here, and I thank you for sharing this poem with all us here...

Hugs2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 08-21-2001).]

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