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Shimmering
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Shimmering iridescent trust auras surround as halos silent sounds soothing glittering of eyes touching gently in recall steep me in your hue lips once met are blessed shimmers of you remain warm remnants of a smile communication linking holds forevering circle come circle shimmering |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
shimmering indeed... nicely done!!!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
communication hasn't always came easy for me, I liked this a lot! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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poetsguild Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 85Florida |
Nice use of the form, Lady In White Enjoyed it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ 'lips once met are blessed shimmers of you remain warm remnants of a smile communication linking holds forevering circle come circle' And ... you know~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A remarkable piece. BRAVA! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Shimmering to say the least! Wonderful! If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Nicely said... musical to the ear as well as vivid imagery for the mind. |
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