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Walking Toward You
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Walking Toward You |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Walking Toward You Sneakers grow grass-tinged, wet prairies’ green tickling back of legs, still the dew is not enough and all is in need of rain sun glints sparkle off golden-red curls, I lift my face to take in passionate rays, feeling their permanence cool breezes bring in the first thoughts of how fast summer went, after all traces of humid still hang heavy in my heart, lowering into my center, solid reminders of getting through this to you the walk is not lonely, now, for promises of all my tomorrows hang on your very word every word cherished with a spider’s silk ribbon you have bowed up all gifts ever needed a spider’s silk, so tenacious in its steeled splendor, promises are just that your word is key in doorways of many tomorrow’s to come your pledge remains so now in wet grass-stained sneaks, I shall watch the spider spin spun promises, knowing the key to life, its significance bearing more than lost hope for there is none, now as I walk toward you, and my smile shall cast shade in which we shall reside |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely written... images are good and the flow very nicely carries you along... enjoyed!!! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Decaf....I've been struggling for days with an "August" poem. Still no luck. This is nice. Bob |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sun glints sparkle off golden-red curls, I lift my face to take in passionate rays, feeling their permanence cool breezes bring in the first thoughts of how fast summer went, after all traces of humid still hang heavy in my heart, lowering into my center, solid reminders of getting through this to you the walk is not lonely, now, for promises of all my tomorrows hang on your very word every word cherished with a spider’s silk ribbon you have bowed up all gifts ever needed ======================== your pledge remains ======================== as I walk toward you, and my smile shall cast shade in which we shall reside ======================= oh my....me thinks the journey just became much shorter... this is poetry in motion... and that last verse ...Perfect Deca...perfect Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DecaFlame~ Ohhhhhh, sooooooo pretty ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful setting Decaflame! "the walk is not lonely, now, for promises of all my tomorrows hang on your very word every word cherished" You are such a reflecting romantic here in this poem.....well done!! |
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