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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I studied in silence The ancient one Leaning at precarious angles over waters edge Gnarled trunk hovers In defiance of gravity Anchored by roots Wriggled deeply Between stones and loose Earth Begging fish It seems to repose In shadows so as not to be Without the company Of other life Stretching As I rise My own angles lessen And roots are remembered Without begging for A stronger hold Or fewer stones |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Oh yes! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat--The tree indeed can live through many world changes...lovely metaphore for strength and endurance. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
There is a tree that stretches out over a pond that I visit...reaching westerly over the waters... just as you describe... you didn't tell me you were coming for a visit... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow, with each new piece, you continue to amaze and excite...my mind loves the feel of reading you  |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Gnarled trunk hovers In defiance of gravity Anchored by roots Wriggled deeply Between stones and loose Earth Those words have the power, the wealth is endless. Enjoyed, for sure! Willie [This message has been edited by WRBreezin (edited 08-16-2001).] |
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poetsguild Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 85Florida |
I didn't do a syllable count but the breaks give this piece the feel of a haiku. It also has a reverance for life that I appreciate. Good work. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
A tree is a tree is a tree is a tree, the fourth dimension being what it is, but you have put this one in its place nicely. Thanks, I like it a bunch. "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
It is hard not to behold a tree like that with reverence...I enjoyed the peaceful perspective. ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Completely wonderful write. Sandra |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Stand tall - and be sufficiently humble to learn from that which has gone before us... I like it.. Capt Ron.. |
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