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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-08-14 07:46 PM

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guardians linger
spirituality soars
fires flame the night

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custodians mind
sentiments of warriors
voices on the wind

o
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wolves ever watchful
spirits guide their steps tonight
elevated cries

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caliginous sky
moon bright casting shadows walk
sentinels, silent

o
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[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 08-14-2001).]

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-08-14 09:13 PM

Very well done, Karilea! You're really good at these!

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-08-14 09:18 PM

wonderful!!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-08-16 03:46 AM

Karilea~
I thought I heard the sound of moccasin's ~
Such lovely, lovely imagery captured in gentle keep~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-08-16 09:08 AM

ah.. very nicely penned... I do enjoy this form and you do it quite well..

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

5 posted 2001-08-16 09:28 AM

I echo Marge ... very well constructed

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2001-08-16 09:30 AM

excellent sunshine..enjoyed..

~Victoria~

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2001-08-16 07:35 PM

Whispered cries in flight
rest in the beds of needles
upon today's pines

~*~

Forgotten battles
bleed innocently tonight
within stones of time

~*~

Wonderful senyrus and surely a topic worth much portrayal. Well done.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2001-08-16 11:34 PM

I had to print them and put in your booklet I keep up, these were outstanding Sunshine.

If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed
~* Mysteria *~

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2001-08-17 08:53 AM

These were awesome, Karilea

Take a bow, Queen of haikus/senryus

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

10 posted 2001-08-17 09:57 AM

very fine! seem historically sound, having a very traditional feel to them

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