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SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

0 posted 2001-08-16 06:47 AM

Letting Go

Her rounded face
showed no trace
of her sorrow

Though he is dead
it is said
that he lives on

But she still weeps
before sleep
for his absence

Her one last cry
of goodbye
and she joins him

by Krista Caron, 1997

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 08-18-2001).]

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

1 posted 2001-08-16 07:01 AM

Hiya Kitten

Sad piece you've penned but well written and I'm glad I read

~HUGS~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

2 posted 2001-08-16 06:24 PM

Tracie ~ sad indeed....my muse had the blues back then....but fortunately it is purely fictional!

Thanks for reading and commenting!
*hugs back*

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2001-08-17 10:38 PM

Hi SmittenKitten,

Wonderful work here, enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2001-08-17 10:41 PM

interesting..

i like..even if its "blue"..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

in front of total strangers will ya kiss me..
flowers for no reason but you miss me..
oh..i wanna be in love.. -etheridge

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

5 posted 2001-08-17 10:51 PM

Cerenity ~ Thank you!

Hey, I've been to Escondido, California before!

neato

G ~ I'm glad to hear that

It's one of the first poems I ever wrote and I just felt like posting it since I was too "blue" at the time to come up with anything new!

Hugs to both of you!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-08-18 01:17 AM

SmittenKitten~
Very artfully done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-08-18 07:19 AM

I know those blue feelings all too well.
Nice write.
Sandra

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

8 posted 2001-08-18 12:00 PM

Marge~ Thank you Marge

And I've noticed you're as fond of the squiggly (tilde, whatever!) character as I am!

*hugs back*

Sandra~ Yes, it is too bad they are a part of living...but I guess we wouldn't appreciate our happy times as much if we didn't have sad ones to cntrast! Thank you for the read and your comments

*hugs*

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