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Open Poetry #15
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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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0 posted 2001-08-16 01:55 AM

Heat of day dries up
Cool of evening dampens down
Cycles all around
      
    
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VAS
Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2001-08-16 06:52 AM

like it Krawdad, so thrilled I inspired someone to write something, thank you for such a wonderful compliment!
Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635
2 posted 2001-08-16 09:48 AM


Isn't inspiration wonderful! You took a very good poem, and adapted it well to another poetic form...

well done!
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Member Patricius
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3 posted 2001-08-16 09:51 AM

nicely done... I enjoyed both the inspiration and the results....
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