Open Poetry #15 |
The Difference You've Made |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
When I feel lonely and feel the need to be loved I close my eyes and search for you I know the sight of your face will always ease my troubled mind Your smile warms my heart and your presence uplifts my soul Your love plays like a symphony of the heart a sweet medley of tunes that dance within my heart and brighten up my day I sometimes feel so fragile like a beautiful shell that has been battered against the rocks and closes at the first sign of danger Where would I be without you in my life? A mere shadow of what I have become void of confidence void of self esteem void of your love You have opened up my world like no other You have made me feel important and restored my faith in myself You have made me feel loved made me feel wanted made me feel desirable made me feel needed Thank you for this person I have become for believing in me and for showing me the way when I became lost and in need of guidance for holding my hand for encouraging me and most of all ......... for simply loving me Suetang |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Suetang, this is a really tender sweet verse. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
An absolutely beautiful and tender thank you and I am sure if this is really for someone they are going to cherist it Sue, well done. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Such lovely phrases of love's intend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
What a beautiful way to say "thank you" to someone for giving you their love and support. |
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