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Kitty**
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Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2001-08-15 10:21 PM




There is a place I visit often, a world of my own creation.
Peaceful nights, under the stars, and birds singing upon awakening.


There is a brook that flows nearby, with huge rocks scattered around.
Wild flowers grow abundantly there, and natures voices are found.


In my world I am happy, and in there, no tears are ever shed.
My soul is satiated, I am content, for the time being fully fed.


When I am there, I wade the brook,  wild flowers tucked in my hair.
I dance and sing to natures beat, and I have not a care.


So when I'm feeling out of sorts, and reality clutters my mind,
I go to my world and forget it all, leaving this world behind.


This is where I always go,  rejuvenating my soul for a while.
This temporary world is my haven, I'm engulfed in natures smiles.


And so I skip upon the rocks, enchanted by this world.
And yes, I know that I can't stay, but I return home a different girl.

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

© Copyright 2001 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2001-08-15 10:48 PM


Kitty, I know you don't want company in your little corner of the world, but I sure would like to visit once in a while.  Wonderful soothing,  ME
CMGrimm
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2 posted 2001-08-15 10:50 PM


hmm....sounds like your world is very close by mine...

I love this one kitty.  great piece of writing here

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



Kitty**
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Charlottesville,VA USA
3 posted 2001-08-15 11:03 PM


Mother_Earth,
You will be gladly accepted in my world anytime! In fact I've picked out a really nice rock for you to dance on...;-)
COME VISIT!!!

Chris,
  I wondered who's world that was that I passed on the way to mine. Welcome neighbor! BTW: You can come dance there too...I have plenty of room! ;-)

And thanks to both of you for your response and nice comments!

Kitty

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
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4 posted 2001-08-16 10:57 AM



Kitty, what a lovely little dance....I would join you, but my shackles will not let loose till the week's end...

well done!

vandana
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5 posted 2001-08-16 12:19 PM


enjoy
Kitty**
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6 posted 2001-08-16 12:25 PM


Decaflame:
Sorry you're shackled but come on by when you break free...;-)


Vandana:
Thanks for stopping in...;-)

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