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Red Skied Sunset
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Red Skied Sunset |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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 Red Skied Sunset this is my favorite time of day red skied sunset on the bay it means the day now has ended and night time to me, is so splendid I find no alarm in the dark the moon has a special beauty mark sunset starts the draw on me so tender to the black velvet blanket I surrender the seduction starts with red sunset sweet kiss of night with no regret picture provided by Bernie Slicker "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is gorgeous Helen...great teamwork here...I like the day's end too. These complement each other perfectly. Smiles and applause to a fellow insomniac poet. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
The image is graphically vivid even without the picture. The words paint it so well... a special time of day. |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
thank you for a reminder of this feeling. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is wonderful..... The picture is Beautiful too |
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1slippery_lady Junior Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 20Ohio, USA |
WOW Slickster, this is great, really enjoyed the poem, AND the pic.  [This message has been edited by 1slippery_lady (edited 08-14-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Very nice... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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