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Open Poetry #15

Fruitless seed of love

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-08-15 09:14 PM

My love planted its seed in your heart
it grew steady
strong
bold
was deep rooted
(so I thought)
but bore no fruit
(you never loved me)

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

1 posted 2001-08-15 09:22 PM

walker, you planted the seed of love and it didn't take root. So sorry, but you wrote a great poem. Hope you have better luck in love next time. ME

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-08-16 09:02 AM

ah yes..seeds planted do not guarranty a harvest...

nicely written....

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2001-08-16 03:28 PM

a bare write....well done....

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-08-16 04:03 PM

I like the simplicity of this poem. It wasn't your planting of the seed that was wrong, it was just planted in the wrong garden. Keep looking you'll find the garden that is just for you.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2001-08-17 12:06 PM

A balance is hard to find when things turn upside down. Just as the roots were not infinite, neither were they non-existant.

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