Open Poetry #15 |
I'll Huff And Puff and Blow Your Heart Down |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I'll Huff And Puff and Blow Your Heart Down |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
No childhood fable, this....from your heart of hearts, a message well read.... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well read indeed... nice work... and a message well delivered |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The temptation is there...James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, Sharon, Another heart wrenching poem. THis is truly written from deep within, and therefore it must be true. Your heart may be fragile but it is big enough to hold a lot of love. I'd like to quote part of a poem I wrote about my crystal heart being shattered, because you remind me so much of myself: "A thousand pieces would remain To cast a goblet in my name Enhanced with silica more fine And etched by hand of my design The light of life shines through the glass Reflecting rainbows in its cast In sparkling joys of present days It beams at you in crystal gaze Translucent chalice made unique Wrought with a woman’s own mystique A goblet rare to touch the lip And warmly held with every sip" This is you, dear Love ya, Liz |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Mysteria, if your heart was made of steel, would such beauty still run from your pen? Maeve Take me home to Erin's shores, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mysteria- Build it out of love my friend. There is no stronger foundation. Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lady in White ~ I am glad not all fables are as sad as this one aren't you? CPhat Hair ~ I am glad it reads well, thank you. JamesMichael - Thank you for reading this. Liz ~ Yes, this is a true one! I just intend to be cautious who I let into my heart on this internet., When I say I am a friend I mean it, even in cyberspace, but a lot of people have used me or don't take friendship as seriously as I do, so it is my own fault and I get hurt that is all. So I intend to be very careful from now on. Your poem by the way was absolutely, positively fantastic but then is there one of yours I don't like, no! Thank you Liz I do believe I got a hug, and I needed it Maeve ~ I love people and life, so the good always wins out with me eventually. Vicky ~ Believe me I try, but get kicked a little too often, but I keep trying. If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Oh, Sharon....words I can so vividly relate to. Sometimes life finds the strangest ways of rebuilding broken hearts and ravaged dreams...one heartbeat at a time...and that foundation is built upon the discovery of special friends who touch your heart and change your life forevermore (....like, say..YOU...for instance...~*~winks...) ....and sometimes even by tossing unexpected love into your passageway from the opposite end of the earth and completely leaves the heart spellbound and melting in a pool of Danielle Steele's unwritten chapters...~*~smiles~*~ I loved this, Sharon...and I shall see you very soon...keep the light on, and please don't forget us at the airport! (he he) Hugs, smiles...and love you muches of bunches, ~*~dawn~*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Martha Dawn Cowan ~ How could I ever forget you! You would never let me! Thank you for the novel as well. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Your heart has to be made of steel - that's what makes you so strong ! ! But .... we all know there's a secret chamber that is ALWAYS unlocked for loving friends to enter. Wonderfully written, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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samt Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 52Brisbane |
Love is unbreakable when can't you see everything happons for a reason Love is you and me when you see Love so true you will simply see how it all adds up now oh so naturally Your heart is whole to start with. So it cannot break. Your poem is truely beautiful It touched my heart with ease I hope you see the bigger picture The one with you and me. (everything) Sam |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Marge ~ It has an "annex" but I hide that key well now! Thank you my friend. samt ~ Thank you for the lovely response and for reading my poem too. If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed |
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Miranda Junior Member
since 2001-07-26
Posts 32OOOOOklahoma! |
Mysteria! I love the title to pieces... and the poem, I feel you pain, but you know that hon. Beautiful... simply beautiful. Miranda |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Miranda ~ I know you know I know Thanks. If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Mysteria, what a beatifully written piece. I did enjoy this very much. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Eloise ~ Why thank you kindly for your nice words. If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
This was very well written. A poem that I can totally relate to. I am 30 years old and my heart has been hidden behind a wall of steel my entire life( due to abuse and abandonment). But~~~~~~~~~~~after 30 years, someone----------my ANGEL Jane has somehow, unexpectedly, unintentionally, uninvitedly, but blessingly she has entered my heart. And to tell you the truth----as afraid of this relationship as I am, It is utterly beautiful. SHe has become my light, my strength, my rock, my friend, my sister, my angel. Even if I do end up being hurt by her in some way--------I will forever be greatful that she has entered my life and became a part of my life. |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
This is powerful in both its sadness (representing what you have been through) and its strength (representing your resolve to "rebuild" again). Very well written and a wonderful message. Just make sure that the steel you use to build up your heart doesn't trap your feelings within. - Jeff |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Mysteria What a beautiful piece of writing from a very special heart. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lisann: There is a risk in almost everything, so take the good parts and be grateful for them, for not taking a chance will give you no memories. Thanks for reading Rasclx: Very perceptive - thank you. Suetang: Thank you for your very kind words. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 08-17-2001).] |
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