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Open Poetry #15

Burning to See

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-08-15 04:14 PM

broken glass glitter
of sun on rippled wave
reflects to the back of eye
touching inside

dark places

that seldom feel the warmth
or have the light to find
the piles of driftwood
left from other floods

false illumination
can be harsh to mind
but reflections
a kinder form of revealing
the wood to burn
when the sun goes down
and broken glass glitters
are left behind

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-08-15 04:16 PM

Broken Glass Glitters. What a perfect set of words there.
Another good one.
Sandra

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-08-15 04:18 PM

I had to shield my eyes from the first line...

well done Sir! Enjoying your return...

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

3 posted 2001-08-15 04:18 PM

Very poignant words, heartfelt and deep.

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