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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-08-15 04:14 PM


broken glass glitter
of sun on rippled wave
reflects to the back of eye
touching inside

dark places

that seldom feel the warmth
or have the light to find
the piles of driftwood
left from other floods

false illumination
can be harsh to mind
but reflections
a kinder form of revealing
the wood to burn
when the sun goes down
and broken glass glitters
are left behind


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1 posted 2001-08-15 04:16 PM


Broken Glass Glitters. What a perfect set of words there.
Another good one.
Sandra

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2 posted 2001-08-15 04:18 PM



I had to shield my eyes from the first line...

well done Sir!  Enjoying your return...

Gemini
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3 posted 2001-08-15 04:18 PM


Very poignant words, heartfelt and deep.
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