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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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SHE SAID She said with words believable what one was want to hear that anything was possible as long as I was near. She said it was our destiny to’ve come together thus not planned was it by her or me but serendipitous. She asked if I might be her friend I answered that I would she had a broken heart to mend and sure we were we could. She ached to find a remedy to soothe her stress and toil with words in rhyme and melody she wrote to me her foil. She wrote of all her troubled days she penned about her bane we hoped that with some change of ways she might find love again. She called when I was there to talk we heard each other’s pain then hoped in hand one day to walk in sunshine, fog or rain. She said we’re friends forever now and then threw me a kiss but I mistook intent somehow for it has come to this. She’s slipped into a silent mode her words I can not find she’s quit her journey down this road I fear she’s changed her mind. Perhaps she’s found another way or merely disappeared and yet there’s much I’d like to say if she again appeared. "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I hope you hear from her  it hurts to loose a friend |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely pennned... and I hope u find again this friend... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sometimes people come into our lives for one purpose only and leave just as quickly as that is done...rather like a comet lighting up a dark night. I have a friend like this too. I miss him, but would do it all over again. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"some people come into our lives, leaving footprints on our hearts, and we are never the same..." --flavia wonderfully written KRAW..i hate to "lose" people myself..i'd spend my lifetime trying to regain them, only, i've learned that deep persuing as such is mostly detrimental.. these people we lose..they will come back, when it is time..if thats the higher plan for our lives.. everything happens for a reason my friend.. i'm hoping your "lost" friend comes back around..but if not, know that she has likely been touched by you in a most unique way  ...hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ in front of total strangers will ya kiss me.. flowers for no reason but you miss me.. oh..i wanna be in love.. -etheridge [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-15-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You placed a certain twist on some of your words, it made me slow down to read them, but allowed me to join the thought process behind them... well done, and I hope she returns soon...if nothing else, but to say hello... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Thank you all for stopping by . . . SEA, Not likely I think, but you never know. Cpat, Thanks for the compliment. This one was hard to "control", it had many places it wanted to go. K, Perhaps you are right. Seems unfair, but who said there were rules? dg, Thanks for the "wonderfully written". And you give wise council me thinks. "Better to savor the flight, than to chase the butterfly." And hugs to you, my friend. Lady in White, Thanks for the compliment. Glad you enjoyed. |
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