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The Bamboo Garden |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
The Bamboo Garden Come, And for a moment Weave The many slender, separate trees So closely placed, With motion of a kind Different. Let progress Sideways Slow Induce As palms and finger tips repress Through long, smooth spaces Gently gripped The sliding down away of years Until a memory Abrupts. RMW |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
The peaceful sound of the following passage is like a tender massage to my heart and soul. Very lovely, Bob! Come, And for a moment Weave The many slender, separate trees So closely placed, |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
A gardner will see tranquility - a Veteran will recall other times and places - a poet will ponder both... well done Sir... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob--Enchanting feel to this sliding backwords. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
The many slender, separate trees So closely placed, With motion of a kind Different. Let progress Sideways Slow Induce You have done it again Bob.... set my mind to ponder the images and the thoughts behind them...I agree this could be such different things to different people... as usual.. I am in awe of the words and the form chosen... |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Thanks folks. Hope all are well. Bob |
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