Open Poetry #15 |
Replacing the Actual |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Replacing the Actual Each morning, I awake to thoughts of you, replacing the actual. Throughout the day, I hold onto the tenderness I know that is you. Come the night, I take you with me traveling my dreams... Waiting for your return. ~Wynter * some days I only have small thoughts but high hopes...~smiling "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 08-15-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Kiddo... I hope your big hopes become realities for you.... always enjoy opening your verses to see what s inside....what part of your psyche you share... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Wynter, if we hold onto our desires and happy thoughts thoughout each day, the actual is surely present but for the being and our mind can be at peace and have patience till the time is right. Great write. Rick |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
what a sad ring to this and boy do I know how you feel! Karen |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ah, missing someone is so painful...hang on to the hope and the memories |
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