Open Poetry #15 |
From Shades Of Grey To Rainbows |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Another grey day void of any color as my heart remains frozen with grief Am I mistaking my own tears for blurring my vision or is it just the rain slowly trickling down the window pane? A good day for funerals A good day for being depressed A good day for being alone Then you came along and everything changed....... The storm clouds blew away with the warm gentle breeze A rainbow arched across the sky after the last drop of Summer rain My tears dried up and were replaced with a smile as bright as the sun My heart had now thawed and was filled with love Happiness had now taken possession of my soul This was a day for lovers a day for you and I a day for romance We'll watch the sun melt over the sea as the day comes to a close Then we'll kiss underneath the light of the silvery moon as two souls are joined and two hearts become one Suetang |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Aww...how romantic what a lovely day! I love the progression from stormy grey to rainbow happiness Beautifully written! ~Krista ^.-.^ < =o= > "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." ~Winnie the Pooh [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 08-15-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lovely ... romantic... hopeful... ENJOYABLE!!!! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
The turn of term from dim of gray to light of day, and promises...promises... well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang, Yes very romantic. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I'm so glad so many of you enjoyed this one, I enjoyed the challenge of writing it. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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