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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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0 posted 2001-08-14 11:25 PM


Another grey day void of any color
as my heart remains frozen with grief
Am I mistaking my own tears
for blurring my vision or is it just
the rain slowly trickling down the window pane?

A good day for funerals
A good day for being depressed
A good day for being alone

Then you came along and everything changed.......

The storm clouds blew away
with the warm gentle breeze
A rainbow arched across the sky
after the last drop of Summer rain
My tears dried up and were
replaced with a smile
as bright as the sun

My heart had now thawed
and was filled with love
Happiness had now taken
possession of my soul
This was a day for lovers
a day for you and I
a day for romance

We'll watch the sun melt over the sea
as the day comes to a close
Then we'll kiss underneath
the light of the silvery moon
as two souls are joined
and two hearts become one

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
1 posted 2001-08-15 01:06 AM


Aww...how romantic      what a lovely day!  I love the progression from stormy grey to rainbow happiness      Beautifully written!
~Krista
  ^.-.^
< =o= >



"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh



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Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2001-08-15 09:09 AM


lovely ... romantic... hopeful...

ENJOYABLE!!!!

Decaflame
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3 posted 2001-08-16 10:05 AM



The turn of term from dim of gray to light of day, and promises...promises...

well done!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2001-08-16 10:09 AM


Suetang,
Yes very romantic.

vandana
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5 posted 2001-08-16 12:22 PM


enjoy
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
6 posted 2001-08-16 06:14 PM


I'm so glad so many of you enjoyed this one, I enjoyed the challenge of writing it.
Take care....Sue

Suetang

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