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Open Poetry #15

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WRBreezin
Member

since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

0 posted 2001-08-14 04:36 PM

Slip

Where do I go when I'm staggered
slip the low down and find honey
Trekking the cavern's secrets
closed eyes persuade me
her soft words dropping in spiral
Indifference wanders away
unable to complete misgivings
from there a low spark rises high
spearing all want
In circles she disrobes me
and in private silence we lay

Willie
© 2001

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-14 04:40 PM

quite a write here.... filled with sensual images...and interesting word play...

I enjoyed

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-08-14 04:45 PM

No slip...this...

wow...

WRBreezin
Member

since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

3 posted 2001-08-15 09:15 AM

Thanks, Cpat Hair, and Lady in White

I'm glad this one caught your eyes!

Willie

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-08-16 03:43 AM

WRBreezin~
I greatly enjoy the imagery you employ~

'her soft words dropping in spiral'

*sigh*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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