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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212
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Slip Where do I go when I'm staggered slip the low down and find honey Trekking the cavern's secrets closed eyes persuade me her soft words dropping in spiral Indifference wanders away unable to complete misgivings from there a low spark rises high spearing all want In circles she disrobes me and in private silence we lay Willie © 2001 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
quite a write here.... filled with sensual images...and interesting word play... I enjoyed |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
No slip...this... wow... |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Thanks, Cpat Hair, and Lady in White I'm glad this one caught your eyes! Willie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WRBreezin~ I greatly enjoy the imagery you employ~ 'her soft words dropping in spiral' *sigh* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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