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Ellipses Of The Heart |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Ellipses Of The Heart ~*Marge Tindal*~ Leave-taking .... you from me Heartbreaking .... mine in pieces Breathtaking .... penned poetry Understanding .... not to be Accepting .... I unwillingly Winding .... memories Reminding .... me Forevering lingers ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You know that I...and a few others...love these little...ellipses....of thought... just as I adore this gem.... |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Quite a lovely and innovating piece..... I like the form....... Thank you *************************** "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
is this one broken? very creative..and nicely done... I enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Heartbreaking .... mine in pieces Breathtaking .... penned poetry Understanding .... not to be Accepting .... I unwillingly Winding .... memories Reminding .... me ================================== You just covered me in butterfly sprinkles and you know that I know...  this ones a keeper  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that is a shattered heart if I ever saw one, into the library she goes! To see real beauty ~ look with your heart |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Oh...this just reached in and tugged at my heart. "Leave-taking .... you from me Heartbreaking .... mine in pieces Breathtaking .... penned poetry Understanding .... not to be Accepting .... I unwillingly Winding .... memories Reminding .... me Forevering lingers ~" Touched me deeply, my friend. Love and big hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Once again, Marge!! You are the best!! Very touching poem!! Keep it up!! I love your poems so much. ~Jeff~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice, much enjoyed. Sandra |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hugs to you, lovely from your heart...  Lauren~ Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 08-14-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very creative, Marge! Well done, as always! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Thanks so much. MyEnchantedMelody~ I appreciate your sweet reply~ CPatHair~ You had a clue (?)  JanetMarie~ Abundant with those sprinkle ... from this heart to yours~  Mysteria~ Just one that needs a little mending~ Thank you sweet lady~ Vicky~ I knew you would, sweetie~ JBaker~ I appreciate your thoughtful reply, friend~ CatalinaMoon~ Thanks, gal~ GreenEyes~ Now ... my turn to smile~ Thank you for peeking in, sweet lady~ Denise~ Thanks so much, friend of my heart~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I am so glad that I just happened upon this and you know that if anything is going to get my attention quicker than an image filled poem then it is going to be a "shape" creation and who better to toss one to these hungry eyes but the one who introduced me to them. Beautifully written and wonderfully crafted as always. big one for this my friend. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Oh creative lady, you have touched my heart with this I just *love* your shape poems! I really must try my hand at one sometime ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--As well as the Pacific ocean...I have the super glue! This was so original..and could be read in so many different directions, I'm dizzy! Hugs! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ You're such a sweetie~ It is no wonder gv ge yuhi~ 'Bout time for a 'shaped one' from you~ You do them so well ..... Of course you had a good teacher ! Tee-Hee-Hee ! SmittenKitten~ Do try ... they are so fun ! Thank you, dear. Martie~ Me blonde ! Me ALWAYS dizzy ! Of course now you know you've got me playing with this one ! ! ! Breaking mine heart .... in pieces Poetry penned ....Taking breath Not to be .... Understanding Accepting .... I unwillingly Reminding....memories Unwinding .... me Malingering forever ~ Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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