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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2001-08-14 12:42 PM

A HiddenTreasure
~~~

A moment together
as twilight has fallen
bare-feet
through clear waters
that crash
foamy shore
Through
song of the feather
this moment forever
Heart beating my chest
tis now yours
evermore
~
One sound
from your lips
my gladness awakens
Your smile
tis a sight
for the angels to see
You met me at sunset
to strole
the clear waters
I lean close
to whisper ...
Dam !
I stepped in
Dog doo
~~~

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-08-14 02:13 PM

You caught me up with this...

quote:
Through
song of the feather

and then you stepped in it!

ROTF...and enjoying every squeemish look on your face...

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-08-14 02:24 PM

Man, Rex, how could you do that, end such a fantastic moment of poetry that way. Is it a statement on life?
"No matter how good it gets, there's still 'dog doo.'

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-08-14 02:28 PM

(chuckling) Some days that is the way it goes...

citizenx
Member

since 2001-07-31

Posts 189
motorcade

4 posted 2001-08-14 03:25 PM

NOthing spoils a romantic evening more than a careless pooch pooping in the serene beaches

shadows flicker sweet end tame
dancing like crazy mourners" magazine

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

5 posted 2001-08-14 03:56 PM

You got me off guard with that.......
Such a romance then......oooops!!

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"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

6 posted 2001-08-15 12:28 PM

Thanks all ... for the longest time, I wrote nothing but jokes ... still like to write them now and again

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

7 posted 2001-08-16 06:30 AM

......LOL

just lovin this
~HUGS~
Tracie

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

8 posted 2001-08-16 08:54 AM

Thanks Tracie ... always love to get one of your hugs

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