Open Poetry #15 |
The hand of love |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
So tender is this hand I hold, as sweet as all things sweet With life and dance from music’s heart, it holds me with its beat It guides me through the maze ahead and through life’s next display The hand of love is mine to hold; and it I hold today |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
The warm feel of a partner's hand...well done! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice hand to grasp... nicely done! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rick~ 'The hand of love is mine to hold; and it I hold today' A treat and a treasure~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well done, crisp yet tender, bright and memorable. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
The strongest one there is! Lovely Rick. I hope you hold on for a very long time. Sincerely, Regina |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Thank you all for you kind words, I will hold the hand as I hold you all as my friends, my family of inspiration and caring. Nice to know you are all there reading and sharing with me. Rick |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah Rick, hold it tightly, as it is a great gift. This is a wonderful morning read. Thanks. Sandra [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 08-15-2001).] |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sandra, I will hold the hand tight, for it is all you my friends who fill my heart and days with love, and it I hold with true affection indeed. Thank you for your reply. Rick |
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