Open Poetry #15 |
Love Takes Charge |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Without a single word being said you have the ability to speak right to my heart My heartlight burns so brightly whenever you are near and memories of our times together are never far from my thoughts How I thrive in the garden of your love and bloom within the rays of your smile I sail on the crest of a wave of desire and dive deep into the depths of love's sensual sea only to emerge to the surface as we sail on love's vessel towards the setting sun I feel invincible in your presence as if I am on top of the world My smile remains a permanent fixture on my face whenever you're by my side only to disappear like the sun behind the clouds when you're gone Within my dreams I can always find you as we walk along the warm golden sand watching the sun as it melts over the tranquil sea We lie together on the sand and admire the constellations way above the moon's milky glow You kiss me and transport me towards the star studded sky The galaxy glows more brightly as we make our own fireworks as our passions are ignited and love takes charge Suetang |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hopefully love always charges your hard Suetang...as your words herein do. jwesley |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
eventhough i dont know you your poetry takes me to a different dimension. keep 'em coming. very well written! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sue, you got me with the title and I was impressed with the rest As usual you speak your heart so lovingly. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Very emotional, vivid imagery that communicates well. |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
This is the best form of communication isn't it? Made me think of feeling like a teenager in love. |
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