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rsgwhite
New Member

since 2001-08-13

Posts 1
E. Bridgewater, Massachusetts

0 posted 2001-08-13 09:02 PM

Dark and dusty lies the street
As I stand alone in the night
Walking amongst the biting heat
Facing solo my undaunted plight

The abyss of darkness encircles all
For this there is no solution
As is the case for the woman I call
Within a far deeper pollution

Given my heart, and everything more
Yet she threw it all away
Having taken my soul and core,
My feelings doth she slay

So hence, for whatever morning come,
I remain asunder, never again,
To know forever the pain of some,
A relic of today's disdain.

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

1 posted 2001-08-13 09:16 PM

Wow I'm amazed

You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it.

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

2 posted 2001-08-13 09:22 PM

rsgwhite,

Very cool poem

I liked this alot! You picked a wonderful way to enter the forum.
Welcome to Passions.. I'm sure you'll love it here! I can't wait to see more from you....

TaraB

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

3 posted 2001-08-13 10:07 PM

rsgwhite,
I thnk I have been there...A story wonderfully and heartfelt told... Welcome to Passions..
Elise

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2001-08-13 10:46 PM

What a great first piece you have posted. Welcome to Passions. Take care......Sue

Suetang

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2001-08-13 11:01 PM

Yah...our toes hurt when stepped on, and especially when rolled over by loves weight,
but we let them heal, then go fishin'again...
and again if need be, because the alternative means withering away to nothing when theres plenty to eat...

Very nice first post ... and WELCOME TO PASSIONS, a place where friendship is rampant and you're always welcome...

jwesley

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-08-13 11:19 PM

RSGWhite~
Welcome to the wonderful world of Passions~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

7 posted 2001-08-14 07:20 AM

Welcome rsgwhite! Enjoyed your first post! I hope you have better evenings, and days.

Sincerely,
Regina

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2001-08-14 08:48 AM

Welcome to Passions, and we hope to see more poetry such as this from you! Please, check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

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