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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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for me, she exists, not in flesh and blood but in noun and verb not in blonde and green but in image and phrase she exists and her existence speaks through me through the flow of pen through the tapping of keys and she becomes real but, although she is merely noun and phrase she exists in my heart -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I've been wondering WHERE you were...you've been with HER, haven't you?  As lovely and romantic as always, Sven!!! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautiful Sven, soft and sweet |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Keep Her close, Sven...she mantles your words so very well... |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Poetry is a demanding Mistress. But she brings much joy to many, especially those that love and breathe life into her. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
In some ways the "real" person exists here in words as they perhaps cannot in person. Enjoyed "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sven...James |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, Simply beautiful... Love, Elise |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hm, I guess "she" is hanging out with "he". Nice write, my friend. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, yes I have. . . and she says hi . . .  thank you my friend. . . SEA, thank you my friend. . . Lady, thank you as well. . .she is the muse is she not?? MoonShadow, the most demanding indeed. . . thank you for reading. . . RSW, she exists only in these words my friend. . . thank you. . . James, thank you my friend. . . Elise, thank you as well. . . Sandra, it could very well be. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Our minds and imaginations are perhaps the most powerful. What is the poets illusion and what is their reality is something people will always wonder. Should we, like magicians keep the secrets and truths of our inspiration under wraps or let them show? I like this. Just shows what we can create with our words. Sorry for the ramble, Sven Pen! Nice thoughts. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, Beautiful dear friend I am glad your muse is your close friend and she is coming across so very beautifully, enjoyed so very much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sven- Loved this one. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
and her existence speaks through me through the flow of pen through the tapping of keys These lines have helped me to understand some part of why I write. Thank you. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Sven, you know, perhaps she was hoping you noticed her and perhaps she thinks of you all the time as well. You just never know! Great write here! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Lovely my PoetFriend I very much enjoyed this read... Hugs2uAlways *~coco~* |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderfully written my friend....as usual! Love it! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
there is someone who exists in all of our hearts...not always perfect in every way..but touches us deep within..loved it sven ~Victoria~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
she exists and her existence speaks through me through the flow of pen through the tapping of keys ========================= I love her existence.....giving us those lovely and romantic pieces you write..... Wonderful and gentle .....as always. Thank you ************************** "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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