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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2001-08-13 09:42 AM


Lazy Evening
Virginia Salter

Lazy evening sun going down
you caress the sinew of my heart
with the music of your sighs

as brother breeze gently
fondles my hair and plies
my soul with love

each part of me slowly melts
into the will of your touch
leaving me nearly helpless

to the desires that dwell within
each part of you
each part of me, set me free


© August 27.  2000
© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635
1 posted 2001-08-13 09:46 AM


Very soft, very quiet, and quite pretty...
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2001-08-13 10:06 AM

thanks, Decaflame!!
Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793
3 posted 2001-08-13 12:13 PM

yes.. soft and quiet.. nicely done VAS.. a pleasure to read
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
4 posted 2001-08-13 12:38 PM

Thanks, Cpat!  Good to see you're back again. I'm surely curious about something.
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