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I Will Still Love You
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I Will Still Love You |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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I Will Still Love You As long as the stars sprinkle crystals of light Down through the spaces and blackness of night As long as the moon wears a halo of white I will be holding you tight If silvery streaks from a bright falling star Continue to brandish my dreams from afar To show all the world how amazing you are I will be blessed by a star As long as the starlight can dance on a wave And the palm trees in late evening sea breezes sway Making the shimmering moon shadows play I will still love you this way I’ll never stop holding your heart in my trust As sure as the universe beckons our lust As long as the stars bath our spirits in dust We will go on as we must If all of the night sky would somehow display Not one single star in the vast Milkey Way I'd still wait for night and the closing of day And I would still love you this way Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 08-13-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A woman of promise! Well done Elizabeth... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
You write with such passion ... God bless you for all the "pick me ups" that you post just when it seems i need them most |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
This is how love should be - a promise of forever - and you've written of it beautifully in this graceful poem.  |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
I sure appreciate you as a poet, can't imagine that your love wouldn't appreciate your passion! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ah, Liz, this is wonderful, so full of beautiful imagery and sincere devotion  I love the imaginative and sentimental side of you Into my library this goes~Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--This would make a beautiful love song! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Now this is just plain prettiful ! Lovely, lovely cadence~ Wonderful read aloud~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A large Love looms for some lucky lou. Enjoyed "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Liz-Splendid, beautiful words, I will mark this one for future reference. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
if I could write like this. . . then. . . well, you know. . . beautiful Liz. . . just beautiful. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sven...If I could write like this I would be published  I keep after her to get this all published so I can buy some, and you know the sqeeky wheel sometimes gets oiled This was so romantic and a keeper yet again!To see real beauty ~ look with your heart |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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