Open Poetry #15 |
There You Are |
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
There You Are Life’s raging erratic nature consumes me, Stress pounding down without relief My mind screaming for a way an escape As a wandering hand reaches out…searching.. Hoping for a brief moment of peace And then…… there you are. I hear your soft whisper filled with love And the nightmare vanishes into misty memories As my soul breaks from it’s heavy burden Free to fly on this current of never ending love That you so openly and graciously offer. TaraB |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so lovely, Tara! Very beautifully expressed! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
it's wonderful to be so blessed my friend, not only with the love you have, but with the words to share it.... jwesley |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Denise - Thank you for the compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed it jwesley - I have been very blessed.. I just prays it lasts. Thank you for stopping in TaraB |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I like the way you presented this... very cool... and a sincere write of hope and loves promise. nice to see you smiling in your poetry again RP. I know no one is to blame |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
as it should be. . . when it's right. . . wonderful rp. .. ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Janet - Thank you for your nice words and for stopping in. I'm happy you liked it. Sven - It sure feels right.. one can only hope Thanks for reading TaraB |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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