Open Poetry #15 |
No More Sweet Goodbyes |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Somewhere, up there, ahead in time, there dawns a brand new day... It’s waiting for the dreams we’ve realized... Together we have held onto the light, that’s shown the way... What lies ahead is ours alone, with no more sweet goodbyes... Though all goodbyes are sad, the ones for lovers are the worst... they happen fast and leave things incomplete... We always crave a minute more, to satisfy love’s thirst... But time is cruel, and love’s goodbyes are often bittersweet... When love is bound by time and space, an inch becomes a mile... You took my hand, and guided me along... You kept me near in times when I just cried, like some lost child... Made love to me in written word, and soothed my heart with song... And now I know the time we’ve shared, was always meant to be... And somewhere up ahead, our future lies... The day will dawn, when time apart is just some memory... We’ll wake up in each other’s arms, with no more sweet goodbyes... The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 08-13-2001).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
No more goodbyes, 'tis a lovely thought! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
no more good byes... nice thought.. but I think we are always saying good bye...trick is to find a way that they are not as painful or as permanent.... I enjoyed |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Breathtaking...lovely...I can so relate to this one right now. Thank you for putting my like thoughts into words. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunnyOne~ Just lovely ! ! I love the positiveness of it ! Way to go gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny No more goodbyes is a wonderful thought and you have described it beautifully. Pinch me so I can wake up from a delightful dream. Oh well, maybe someday. Enjoyed and am happy for you! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sunnyone I know that if I have to take a goodbye I would rather have a sweet one than a sad one...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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