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Trip to Cool
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Trip to Cool |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Trip to Cool I am going to take a trip to cool leave behind breathless air and the moisture filled bellowing faces that peer over the mountains with daggers of exploding power that fire across the dry I am going to the blue pacific and stand in damp sand watch children jump wave riffles water frolic glee me I am going to run with water and dive into the blossom sink into the swirl pass the line of care that sometimes falls so heavily that the heart breaks Then just cork past the reef and jetty water purring in my ears the sun a tunnel of light and be other than I The heat will drown and sink the sun melt behind line of eternity and my chair will float yes it will into the cool [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 08-12-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Martie, this sounds heavenly, wonderful images here! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Which beach? I'll bring the picnic basket! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very cool poem, Martie! Beautifully done, as always! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I want to come with you into the "cool" Martie  A most wonderful write, enjoyed it very much Martie Maree |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Head west from those Santa Anna winds, crest the Pacific for a swim. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am going to run with water and dive into the blossom sink into the swirl pass the line of care that sometimes falls so heavily that the heart breaks Then just cork past the reef and jetty water purring in my ears the sun a tunnel of light and be other than I The heat will drown and sink the sun melt behind line of eternity and my chair will float yes it will into the cool ================================== where ever you are is "in the cool" this is fabulously filled with delight and anticipation.. and Martie...dont forget the sunblock this time  hehe meI know no one is to blame |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Of course you could always come to the Atlantic~ Between the water and a grape Popsicle we'd have the heat beat !  Love ya', gal~ *hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Not knocking the Atlantic...but the Pacific's where it's at! Sounds great to me Martie, and since Sunshine's got the basket, I'll bring the wine, beer, water, or whatever quenches thrist. Enjoyed this much. jwesley |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh, Martie... I wanna go! I could use a break from this Phoenix heat! We could both go hang out with Marge, but make mine an orange popsicle.  Very cool, indeed, my friend! hugs, ~vicky |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
a wonderful trip! |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
This poem is a breeze that refreshes body and soul - beautifully written! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you know I love this I thought for a minute you meant the town just down from me LOL the name of the town is "Cool" |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Beautiful Martie, as always. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
what a lovely, dreamy plan it was 104 here yesterday, well that's the highest I know of anyway I wanna go to the pacific and watch the bobbing children and feel the cool spray of the sea take a little just for me, please |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wanna head a little north? Across the border is the best little cook this side of heaven and she is waiting with open arms for the whole family anytime you want? Great poetry Martie! To see real beauty ~ close your eyes and listen |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kathleen--Heavenly probably and only from my imagination. Karilea--any beach will do as long as there's peanut butter and sand sandwhiches. Hi Denise--thanks for stopping by Maree--You have your own cool, girl...but you're welcome to mine anytime. RS--You sound like you have been here. Janet Marie--ah gosh, yes!...LOL..I'm still peeling. Marge--If I could I would! Jimmy...bring it all and lots of ice! Vicky--You're not that far away to take a trip to the beach. You can stay at my bed and breakfast. Shadow--That was my reason for writing it...thank you for feeling it. Sea--I didn't know about the town "Cool". Must be sort of like "Harmony". Constance--thanks so much for the beautiful Virginia--wow, that was hot for Oregon. Sharon--I may take you up on that some day. I'd sure like to ..and thanks for the invite. |
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