Open Poetry #15 |
Tides Of Friendship - Dedicated To All At Passions... |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Tides Of Friendship Our bond is a vessel which ebbs and flows through the vast sea swaying with intensity awash over the glistening shoreline building sandcastles within our hearts When the storms of life rage on to sink my ship and all my dreams are forced ashore you sail towards me in swift currents of turquoise wave cleansing my soul with moist caress and, I wade in your pool of understanding, love and tenderness upon the tides of friendship When my wings unfold and I am free to fly once more, you let me ride the waves alone across the deep majestic ocean of moonswept mist, warm and inviting from friendship's bliss By Melissa P. Monette Dedicated to all my friends at Passions Love n' hugs [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 08-12-2001).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, Isn't wonderful to have such understanding friends who always offer an outstretched hand? This is a beautiful thank you to all your friends I greatly enjoyed ~hugs~ TaraB |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
wonderful poem and great pictures too...sweet of you to write...helen |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
This is a wonderful poem. It's so nice to be somewhere where everyone cares. Great job. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
When the storms of life rage on to sink my ship and all my dreams are forced ashore you sail towards me in swift currents of turquoise wave cleansing my soul with moist caress and, I wade in your pool of understanding, love and tenderness upon the tides of friendship ---------------------- Wow.......I simply loved every part of this sweet enchanting drift .....and the music was quite quite wonderful...... Melissa..... You are wonderful....... {{{Hugs}}} Thank you ************************** "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful Melissa...all of it! Passions is the home of friends and you show it extremely well. jwesley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When my wings unfold and I am free to fly once more, you let me ride the waves alone across the deep majestic ocean of moonswept mist, warm and inviting from friendship's bliss ============================== right back at you Melis... yes...poetry and friendship...the two make for wonderful inspire and sanctuary... the imagery in this is as delightful as the kind intend. beautiful butterfly poetess jm I know no one is to blame |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Tara, Helen, Passion's Voice, MyEnchanted_Melody jwesley and Janet Marie Thank you for your sweet replies I was in a sentimental mood today and wanted to thank you all for your gift of friendship "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sentimentality's shawl sits well on your shoulders.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Melissa--Beautifully and sweetly stated! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Melissa, this was truly a joy to read, and a special and beautiful poem. Sandra |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Lovely, Melissa; friendship is precious and so hard to find a friend who won't let you down and stays steadfast through thick and thin! Beautifully done! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi Melissa, thank you for your sweet poem. It's strange isn't it that one can feel such bond and friendship for people you never met, just through their words. Sometimes I've a feeling I've known some of you all my life. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you for the privelage of being called "friend". Thanks and hugs. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, What a beautiful gift and compliment to your MANY friends at Passions. We are all blest by your creativity and talent. God bless you real good friend! Dennis :^) |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Ahhhhhhhhh, Melissa, this is precious! |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
Missy, this is wonderful, thank you I'll always consider you one of my best friends |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Melissa! The phrasing in this lovely piece is exquisite and the imagery is wonderful. Very nicely written indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
melissa, you are getting me sentimental too...lets drink to friendship, shall we? i'm just collecting stories in life....colleen from survivor 1 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Wonderful presentation, you write very well. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great loving tribute Melissa and you penned it so very well!! I wish you the very best as you continue on in the language of poetry! |
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